Poetry and short story reviews!

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dogs
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Sat Feb 02, 2013 6:26 pm
dogs says... · Sat Feb 02, 2013 6:26 pm
Step right up!
Don't be shy!
I'm around, any time!

Please post a link to poem or short story you would like me to review, and I shall hopefully give you one within 24 hours :). Poetry is where most my expertise lie, but I am always more than happy to look over some short stories.

Short or tall,
long or small,
I got something to say for them all


TuckEr EllsworTh :smt032
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Morrigan
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Sun Feb 03, 2013 4:44 am
Morrigan says... · Sun Feb 03, 2013 4:44 am
Hi there.

Could you please take a look at this poem for me? I revised recently, and need another opinion. Thank you!

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=99409
"So many poems growing outta them they're practically a poet-tree"
— Gringoamericano




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mihaivisan
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Mon Feb 04, 2013 1:14 pm
mihaivisan says... · Mon Feb 04, 2013 1:14 pm
hey!
think you can spare a few seconds to review this piece?
many thanks!

work.php?id=99531
"And though I'll think of you I guess
Until the day I die
I think I miss you less and less
As every day goes by"




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mihaivisan
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Wed Feb 06, 2013 4:14 pm
mihaivisan says... · Wed Feb 06, 2013 4:14 pm
thanks for your review, I got another one for you, if you care to help out a bit more :)

I appreciate it!
work.php?id=99586
"And though I'll think of you I guess
Until the day I die
I think I miss you less and less
As every day goes by"

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