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Heya, good of you to visit!

Been a bit slow on getting back into reviewing, so force me into it, please.

I'll review any short story or novel. Expect a thought-out, detailed review with a little humor thrown into the mix. I don't mean to brag, but I don't do things half-assedly.

I'll get to the reviews as fast I can manage, but if you request thirty chapters' worth of reviews, it would be healthy to bear in mind that it'll take a while.

And hmph. If you really must insist, I can bend to poetry, but don't expect anything major or overwhelmingly insightful. I can tell when a poem sounds good and most of the time can find a reason for why it doesn't if it doesn't, but that's the extent of my knowledge on that. Ask for poetry reviews at your own risk. *shrugs*

So. Stories. Novels. Even poetry. Post the link, if you wish a review.
Last edited by WaitingForLife on Mon Dec 10, 2012 12:53 pm, edited 3 times in total.
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Do your worst.

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EDIT: Review was thorough and very helpful. +1
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Hey Ait!

This is chapter five of my novel: http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=97541

A review would be greatly appreciated! :D

(The previous chapters are in the same folder, if you want some background)

Thanks.

~Shady

"u and rina are systematically watering down the grammar of yws" - Atticus
"From the fish mother to the fish death god." - lehmanf
"A fish stole my identity. I blame shady" - Omni
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Sorry for the delay, I've been busy! Tackling your chapter nows.
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Short story review request! Would love a nitpicky review to this~ I welcome harshness, as long as you can back it up with what you would do different! Thank you very much.

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Aaalrighty.
Call me crazy; I prefer 'enjoys life while one can'.
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The pen's mightier than the sword - especially when it's wielded by a flipmothering dragon.
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When your heart gets pierced with arrows, don't rip them out and pierce those around you in retribution for your hurt. You'll only unnecessarily wound others and bleed to death yourself.
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