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Camp NaNo April 2024: The Fight for Forever



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Mon Apr 01, 2024 6:52 am
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KateHardy says...



The Fight for Forever
Hearts Tangled Across Time



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The Princess of Darkness

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Mon Apr 01, 2024 6:56 am
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WeepingWisteria says...



Revamped!!


It all starts when Sophia mysteriously wakes up in an alleyway and meets Cassia, who announces that Sophia is a time traveler. Cassia attempts to send Sophia back to her time, only for it to malfunction. Now, as Cassia runs from a dangerous past and Sophia tries to piece together hers, they find themselves running through time. Can Sophia survive the constant time shifts? Will Cassia escape from her mysterious pursuers? As feelings start to blossom, it becomes obvious these two only have two options: fight against time and live happily against all odds or crumble beneath the merciless hands of fate.
She/They/Fae

“the wist i knew would never allow a straight boy in their stories” ~Omni
“Hi Omni can I request wist get the role mom friend :]" ~winter
“ah yes, fear Wist's smile :) <- speaks of layers and layers of secrets” ~mint
  





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Mon Apr 01, 2024 5:31 pm
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Spearmint says...



YESSSSS here for this :DD also that description is epicc :3 (sadly the image doesn't load for me on school wifi, but i'm sure it's amazing as well!! XD)
mint, she/her


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Mon Apr 01, 2024 5:58 pm
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Ahh thank you <33 We’re very excited to revisit this story ^^
She/They/Fae

“the wist i knew would never allow a straight boy in their stories” ~Omni
“Hi Omni can I request wist get the role mom friend :]" ~winter
“ah yes, fear Wist's smile :) <- speaks of layers and layers of secrets” ~mint
  





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Tue Apr 02, 2024 3:16 am
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Carlito says...



I feel like I remember this from previous nanos!!
and i'm ready to sit back and watch kate write 15194214 words
Best of luck to you both for this revamp <3 <3
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Tue Apr 02, 2024 8:25 am
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Day 1


Daily Word Count

1,673/1,667

Remaining Word Count for Target

48,327

Total Word Count of Story

1,673

Favorite out of context quote for the day:

Who is American?


Favorite excerpt of the day:

Spoiler! :
Hello

The woman grinned, waving quite enthusiastically. Hello!

Who am I?

I have no idea! But that's the beautiful things. She waved her hands. We get to meet each other. Also, you got the hang of ASL fast! Have you talked to someone else?

What is ASL?
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Wed Apr 03, 2024 4:42 am
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Day 2


Daily Word Count

1,684/1,667

Remaining Word Count for Target

46,643

Total Word Count of Story

3,357

Favorite out of context quote for the day:

Janice was sitting at a chair in the corner, tapping her fingers against... something that definitely existed. But never in front of her before.


Favorite excerpt of the day:

Spoiler! :
What is that?

Oh, it's a car. Think of a horseless carriage.

A carriage? Is that one you take when you are dead? How does one breathe in a box like that?

Oh, no. It's very easy to breathe. There's even holes in the car dedicated to bringing cool or warm air inside.

It can control the warmth of the air?

Yep!

Sophia gasped. By the stars!
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Day 3


Daily Word Count

1,718/1,666

Remaining Word Count for Target

44,925

Total Word Count of Story

5,075

Favorite out of context quote for the day:

Now we're going into the kitchen and having our G.A.I.I. mandated spaghetti.


Favorite excerpt of the day:

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How could you be? He slammed his hands on the table. We have been kidnapped out of God's great design and held in this house against our will! They claim to want to bring me home, but they only speak in lies.

Cassia's smile seemed a little pained now. Thomas, you gave us three fake names. It was impossible to fill out your paper work.

It's what you foul cretins deserve!
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Day 4


Daily Word Count

1,668/1,664

Remaining Word Count for Target

43,257

Total Word Count of Story

6,743

Favorite out of context quote for the day:

So, the sun is demonic


Favorite excerpt of the day:

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Not too long after her mug was almost empty, Thomas walked downstairs. In an outfit suitable for Massachusetts in sixteen ninety-two. Cassia cleared her throat. "Good morning, Thomas."

"None of you deserve to see another morning."

"I'm doing great. Thank you for asking, Thomas!" She grinned. "How are you doing?"

"Ready to expose your lies."

"That's wonderful. Do you want something to eat before you go? Some toast? A muffin?"

"Your food is tainted."

"Suit yourself then."

Janice walked out of the kitchen and handed her a poppy seed muffin. It smelled heavenly. "Thank you, Janice."

"Of course."

"Ahh your devil's fumes tempt me so but I am stronger than you cretins."

"You sure? Last chance to try Janice's homemade muffins."

"You being devil spawned."

"Okay then. Let's go, Thomas! Let's get you home."
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Day 5


Daily Word Count

1,675/1,664

Remaining Word Count for Target

41,582

Total Word Count of Story

8,418

Favorite out of context quote for the day:

I don't think I'm prepared to explain needles that steal your blood.


Favorite excerpt of the day:

Spoiler! :
"I'm not downplaying anything! I literally started the conversation."

"Throughout our time together you've never downplayed anything?"

Cassia turned bright red. "I'm just saying it's not happening now."

"I will believe you for now."

"You better." Cassia petulantly crossed her arms.

"Wow. I'm so terrified."

"As you should be."

"Mmm Hmm. Cause a five year old is terrifying."

Cassia gasped. "How dare you? You have wounded me. You have wounded my descendants." She clutched her chest and stood up. "I'm waking up Sophia now so you have to treat me like your boss."

Janice chuckled. "Sure. Combat the accusations of acting like a five year old by acting even more like a five year old."

"Good day, Madam. Good day." Cassia did not stomp up the stairs because she was an adult! She had been an adult for a very long time, thank you.
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Day 9


Daily Word Count

2,007/1,891

Remaining Word Count for Target

39,575

Total Word Count of Story

2,007

Favorite out of context quote for the day:

"Welcome to modern pharmaceuticals."


Favorite excerpt of the day:

Spoiler! :
"It is that advanced?"

"Yep! And further in the future, it's way more advanced."

"I see. Thank you. Can you repeat the instructions again?"

"Put it under your tongue and let it dissolve."

Sophia did as she was told. First, there was nothing. And then the taste of chocolate filled her mouth. She gasped.

"The taste just hit you, huh?" Cassia giggled. "Yeah, I guess that's more future medicine, than this current time."
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