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Two Crows Watch from the Gallows Tree (part 15)



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Thu Sep 22, 2022 6:40 pm
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(Yeahhh lol)

“Jerica,” Derik said firmly. “Stop talking.”

“He—“

Stop,” he interrupted, giving her a stern look. “I promise we will talk about this later, but for now you will stop talking and go back to the barracks immediately.”

“But—“

“That’s an order,” Derik said sharply. “Not another word until I come to get you. Go.”

Jerica drew a deep breath, everything within her wanting to argue. But then she got a glimpse of Ash watching and knew better than to disobey a direct order. She huffed loudly and turned on her heel and stormed off.

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"So," Gaius said slowly once Jerica had gone, "I take it you know Rickard."
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Derik let out a little sigh as he turned back to Gaius and Tomhas. How embarrassing. “I’m.. sorry about… that.” He gestured towards the stairs vaguely. He supposed they got a little preview of how badly Jerica handled bad news.

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"From the fish mother to the fish death god." - lehmanf
"A fish stole my identity. I blame shady" - Omni
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"She was understandably upset," Gaius said with a shrug. "He was enslaved by Governor Levin, I take it?"
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“…Yes.” Derik inclined his head. Even more embarrassing. “He was Jerica’s nanny through most of her formative years.”

"u and rina are systematically watering down the grammar of yws" - Atticus
"From the fish mother to the fish death god." - lehmanf
"A fish stole my identity. I blame shady" - Omni
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(Got a bigass gandalf statuette today
It was my graduation gift to myself last year and my last idiot teen purchase [ha fat chance] and it's finally here)

"Ah." He dipped his head. "They were close, then?"
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Thu Sep 22, 2022 7:09 pm
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(That’s so exiting! Pics?)

Derik hummed for a moment. “Jerica believed them to be, yes… I think Rickard was understandably wary.”

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Spoiler! :
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"The artist deals with what cannot be said in words. The artist whose medium is fiction does this in words. The novelist says in words what cannot be said in words." --Ursula K. Le Guin

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Gaius nodded. "He's been recently freed; he's still adjusting. I understand how seeing you two here might be shocking."
"Poor guy," Tomhas said with a small frown.
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Thu Sep 22, 2022 7:19 pm
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(That’s so cool!!!)

Derik grimaced and nodded. “I’m sure… for what it’s worth, I didn’t — and don’t — approve of any of it. If I were Governor instead of Levin slavery would have been outlawed the moment I took power… but… I know that does absolutely nothing to ease his distress or erase his pain. I’m sorry to have upset him.”

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"From the fish mother to the fish death god." - lehmanf
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"Sera will talk to him," Gaius said. "They've gotten close; she ought to be able to give him some comfort. But you ought to speak to your niece and see her to the dormitory; Ky is back now so we need to be cautious."
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Thu Sep 22, 2022 7:25 pm
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“Yeah,” Derik said with a nod. “I’ll be sure to keep her in the barracks the rest of the night. I apologize again for the…” drama. “Outburst.” He began to turn down the hall.

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"From the fish mother to the fish death god." - lehmanf
"A fish stole my identity. I blame shady" - Omni
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Thu Sep 22, 2022 7:26 pm
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Gaius and Tomhas glanced at each other.
"I have other things I need to tell you," Tomhas said quietly. "About Ky. Can we talk in your office?"
Gaius dipped his head and they retreated inside.
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Thu Sep 22, 2022 7:32 pm
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Derik walked quickly to the barracks to be sure he didn’t run into Ky, but then slowed, trying to collect his thoughts. This day kept getting more and more complicated.

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"From the fish mother to the fish death god." - lehmanf
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"We ran into the lady everyone says is half troll," Tomhas said once the door was closed.
"Myna?" Gaius raised an eyebrow. "Is she?"
"Yes." He nodded. "Which was kind of crazy, but she gave us something to protect Ky. A rune bone."
That was interesting. Those hadn't been seen out of a Skald's hands in decades. "Will that make her stop seeing them?" Gaius asked.
"No, but it will keep them from harming her."
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The bigger the issue, the smaller you write. Remember that. You don’t write about the horrors of war. No. You write about a kid’s burnt socks lying on the road. You pick the smallest manageable part of the big thing, and you work off the resonance.
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