Well, with ideas, or certain sentences or words. I wouldn't write the whole thing for you, as that would be cheating But I can do quite a bit.
I am a machine, but it's only skin deep. Once you break through the crust of my humanity, you'll find the soft clouds beneath. Just don't squeeze to hard, or I'll disappear.
I won the first one, and technically I should have taken second in the second event, but the judge miscounted the words that I used. Go figure
I am a machine, but it's only skin deep. Once you break through the crust of my humanity, you'll find the soft clouds beneath. Just don't squeeze to hard, or I'll disappear.
If that's what you mean, then I think you both have a good chance of placing, and, no offense to most of the other people, but your submissions are way better than most of the others, because: First, you actually did not use the letter 'E' whereas a lot of people just put an asterisk or hyphen in place of it, so their language didn't revolve around not using the letter; Second, the story itself revolved around not using the letter 'E,' whereas a lot of other submissions, while they didn't use the letter, they just tweaked their language a little to not use the letter, but still told any old random story. Plus, both of your submissions are humorous, and that's how it should be with such a topic.
I am a machine, but it's only skin deep. Once you break through the crust of my humanity, you'll find the soft clouds beneath. Just don't squeeze to hard, or I'll disappear.
You know if you've placed or won if you receive a notification that says ______ mentioned you in Event 5: _________
The judge will tag all of those who placed, and any honorable mentions they have.
I am a machine, but it's only skin deep. Once you break through the crust of my humanity, you'll find the soft clouds beneath. Just don't squeeze to hard, or I'll disappear.
Both of your submissions for Event #6 were well written, I thought. Personally, when I'm writing a short story for a strange topic, I try to explore some part of it that not everyone will be thinking about. But, like I said, I thought they were well written, and have a very good chance of placing. FatCowsSis I like that little line you put right at the very end. An average reader would have no idea what's going on, but the judge will, so I thought that was actually quite clever.
I am a machine, but it's only skin deep. Once you break through the crust of my humanity, you'll find the soft clouds beneath. Just don't squeeze to hard, or I'll disappear.
Yes, it was confusing, but I think you meant it to be, and you stated as much, so it may actually be a help to you.
I am a machine, but it's only skin deep. Once you break through the crust of my humanity, you'll find the soft clouds beneath. Just don't squeeze to hard, or I'll disappear.
But I can do quite a bit.
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