Young Writers Society

No copyright infringement intended, just had some fun with it.

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It’s been a really really messed up week

Four-plus days of torture, four-plus days of bitter

I’ve got this song stuck in my head you see

Same old California dime, and I really wanna hit ‘er


La, la, la, this sucks La, la, la, oh my goodness La, la, la, ARGH La, la, la


I’ve had it tonight, tonight, there’s a party-less rooftop I think I’m gonna hurl

Tonight, tonight, I just threw a rock at the Hollywood sign

You don’t know how I hate it,

I won’t try and fake it

It’s so not cool, not right, tonight, tonight


I woke up and it’s still there, whoop

I even dreamed about it, wanna shove it in my pocket

Smear it in some elephant poop

And whoever Zach Galifianakis is.


La, la, la, this sucks la, la, la, oh my goodness la, la, la, ARGH la, la, la


I’ve had it tonight, tonight, there’s a party-less rooftop I think I’m gonna hurl

Tonight, tonight, I just threw a rock at the Hollywood sign

You don’t know how I hate it,

I won’t try and fake it

It’s so not cool, not right, tonight, tonight


You got me freaking like

whoah, come on, whoah, seriously, whoah, sheesh, ooh


Make it stop, my heart is pumpin’

through my ears, I’m screaming face-down

It’s my head, I’ll sing what I want to

Driving me crazy, make it get out


Make it stop, my heart is pumpin’

through my ears, I’m screaming face-down

It’s my head, I’ll sing what I want to

Driving me crazy, make it get out


I’m just runnin’ all over this town

I wish this song were ground into the ground

I’m telling you right now, go, cuz this is my show


Oh my gosh

Whoah, come on, whoah, scary animal, whoah, don’t wanna hear you now, whoah


Tonight, tonight, there’s a party-less rooftop I think I’m gonna hurl

Tonight, tonight, I just threw a rock at the Hollywood sign

You don’t know how I hate it,

I won’t try and fake it

It’s so not cool, not right, tonight, tonight

It’s so not cool, not right, tonight, tonight

No, it’s so not cool, not right, tonight, tonight


Make it stop, my heart is pumpin’

through my ears, I’m screaming face-down

It’s my head, I’ll sing what I want to

Driving me crazy, make it get out


Make it stop, my heart is pumpin’

through my ears, I’m screaming face-down

It’s my head, I’ll sing what I want to

Driving me crazy, make it get out

Interesting take on this song...

It works! In fact I think its better than the original song. I liked it because it goes with the same rythym. I found myself singing it! This is like the theme song when your trying to get a song out of your head! This would be one of those songs I wouldn't mind getting stuck in my head!

I love this! I know full well how it is to have a song stuck in your head that annoys you, and I love how you responded to that frustration! It's awesome!

I don't think all the lyrics matched the beat, though. They were amusing enough; they just didn't quite fit. If you really wanted to, you could go back and try to reword things so that they would actually work when sung to the music, but I also understand that this is just for fun, so whatever. (If it were me, I would reword it simply because it would just bug[i] me too much to leave it the way it is now. Then again, I often want to write a parody of a song, but I can't find the words! So congrats on actually finding words to properly spoof the song with. It's very amusing!)

I actually like this song. *notices she's started every paragraph with the word "I"*

There. Now I have one that doesn't begin with "I".

Ok, now I'm just being silly, but there really isn't much else to say! After all, this is a parody, so I can't tell you that [i]your song is wrong, because technically, it's not yours! XD

I love this. That's what it comes down to. I love the humor you've shared with us, so thank you for posting. It really made me smile, and I've been needing all the smiles I can get, recently.

Good job! I hope to see more from you. (If I every get back to reviewing regularly... *sweatdrops*)