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I didnt know what to do
I was looking at you only you

You was standin there with a rose in his hand
tied with a rubber band

You pulled me close next to the little oak tree
and said " Girl, Will you go out with me"

I was standin there in my little school dress
And I said, "Well, I guess yes!"

Chorus-
You were my first love
We'll be here forever
This moment is ours
to share together
You were my last love
They'll never be another
This moment is ours
to share together

I didnt know what to do
I was lookin at you only you

You were putting a corsage on my arm
tied with a pretty pink ribbon

I felt as if i was in your trance
when you said" Will you be my date to the dance."

I was standing there in my pretty prom dress
When I said "Well, Of course. YES!

Chorus- Different

I didn't know what to do
I was looking at you only you

On my finger you were putting a ring
tied with a piece of string

You were kneeling on one knee
when you said " Darling, will you marry me."

I was standing there in beautiful wedding dress
Because I had said "YES! YES! YES!"

Welcome to YWS this was very good

I thought this was a cute little love song. I don't usually like or enjoy love songs because they tend to be about the same thing, but I thought this sounded really sweet. I really don't have much else to add. I was just browsing the 'Lyrics' section and came across this and thought I should offer my opinion. Anyway, I really enjoyed it =)

this is a beautiful song. i only have a little comment,'You was standin there with a rose in his hand', this line didn't really make sense to me. I think "You were standin there with a rose in your hand " makes more sense or perhaps "He was standin there with a rose in his hand" sounds better. whatever you feel fits better. just correct that small mistake and it will be perfect. i can totally see myself singing along to this.
Bravo!! Good job and keep it up!

I love it

--> This one's too good for a new member, keep it up! :3