Hey, here's this song I've written. It's a pretty fast paced pop-rock song. Verses are a little slower than the chorus. Looking forward to get some feedback on it, because the idea for it has been sitting inside me for awhile.
[VERSE 1]
I don’t like people,
That’s just a fact.
So you must be an alien,
Or maybe just a yak.
Because you’re not like the others,
Which is why I seem to care,
About your, well, feelings
How no one treats you fair.
And you start crying alone,
Got kicked out of your own home.
You think you have no place in this world,
But let me in, I’ll let you see
How it is to be, me.
[CHORUS]
And I’ll say
F the world, F the World
If they say you’re not beautiful
Screw the world, screw the world
If they kick you while you’re down
End the world, end the world,
If they push your life and love away,
We could run away from it tonight.
[VERSE 2]
You finally smile,
while we’re walking in the hall
Perhaps who you love,
Isn’t wrong after all.
But their faces tell you otherwise,
With the look of disgust
Come on, just remember
Not everybody hates people like us
And you’re crying there alone,
Friends betray, true colors shown.
You think you have no place in this world,
But let me in, I’ll let you see
How it is to be, me.
[Chorus]
And I’ll say
F the world, F the World
If they say you’re not beautiful
Screw the world, screw the world
If they kick you while you’re down
End the world, end the world,
If they push your life and love away,
We could run away from it tonight.
[Bridge]
The world’s one screwed up place,
War and death commonplace,
Let’s give up the hopeless fight... (fight) (fight) (fight)
[Chorus]
And I’ll say! (F the world, F the world, If they say you’re not beautiful)
And I’ll say! (Screw the world, screw the world, If they hit you while you’re down)
And I’ll say, y-eah, y-eah, yeah…
We could run away from it-
Tonight, tonight, tonight, to-night. To...night.
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