Since you were the last person to give me a review (and perhaps the only one to give *gasp* constructive criticism on) a song and since a quick scroll revealed this is the only song on the first page with no reviews, I thought I'd go ahead and review it.
I really liked this. The first verse threw me off a bit. I'm not quite sure who's busy dangerously thinking. A subject pronoun may help there. And I didn't like the wealth line.
In the second verse, it says "Trying to do their best" but what are they trying to do their best at?
Good job, keep it up! :thumb:
"You do ill if you praise, but worse if you censure, what you do not understand." Leonardo Da Vinci
It suddenly struck me that that tiny pea, pretty and blue, was the Earth. I put up my thumb and shut one eye, and my thumb blotted out the planet Earth. I didn't feel like a giant. I felt very, very small. — Neil Armstrong
