Since you were the last person to give me a review (and perhaps the only one to give *gasp* constructive criticism on) a song and since a quick scroll revealed this is the only song on the first page with no reviews, I thought I'd go ahead and review it.
I really liked this. The first verse threw me off a bit. I'm not quite sure who's busy dangerously thinking. A subject pronoun may help there. And I didn't like the wealth line.
In the second verse, it says "Trying to do their best" but what are they trying to do their best at?
Good job, keep it up! :thumb:
"You do ill if you praise, but worse if you censure, what you do not understand." Leonardo Da Vinci
