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Sun Jul 03, 2011 9:39 am
LisaMCooper says...



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Sorry. But because I have joined HubPages, I must remove my works from any other site they show up on. If you would like to read any of my works or Five Months, please go here: Lisa Cooper's HubPages
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Sun Jul 03, 2011 6:34 pm
Deanie says...



Well, this wasn't rubbish it was pretty good actually. Lyrics change depending how you sing them. I sang them slowly and they didn't sound that bad. Pretty good. (The lyrics, not my sing, I sound like a cat being squished by a car'.

Good job!
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Sun Jul 03, 2011 7:55 pm
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Deanie wrote:Well, this wasn't rubbish it was pretty good actually. Lyrics change depending how you sing them. I sang them slowly and they didn't sound that bad. Pretty good. (The lyrics, not my sing, I sound like a cat being squished by a car'.

Good job!


Thank you. :)
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Sun Jul 03, 2011 10:59 pm
Rubz says...



This is so pretty! I actually felt really sad reading it :( If you're speaking from personal experience I hope that you're feeling better now. Albert Camus once said, "Blessed are the hearts that can bend, for they shall never be broken." We all hurt, just don't let yourself break :)
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Sun Jul 03, 2011 11:41 pm
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Rubz wrote:This is so pretty! I actually felt really sad reading it :( If you're speaking from personal experience I hope that you're feeling better now. Albert Camus once said, "Blessed are the hearts that can bend, for they shall never be broken." We all hurt, just don't let yourself break :)

Thank you! ^^ And yes, I was writing this thinking of personal experience. And again, thank you, I am feeling... Better than I was before I wrote this. Also, I promise I won't let myself break. :)
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Mon Jul 04, 2011 12:33 am
dolwright says...



Wow! i always give the lyrics forum a pass, but this piece got me reading to the end, you could actually go platinum with this, good work. If this was from a personal experience, well, at least something good came out of it, I've been there too, and your lyrics made me feel like I'm not alone. thank you for writing this.
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Mon Jul 04, 2011 12:49 am
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dolwright wrote:Wow! i always give the lyrics forum a pass, but this piece got me reading to the end, you could actually go platinum with this, good work. If this was from a personal experience, well, at least something good came out of it, I've been there too, and your lyrics made me feel like I'm not alone. thank you for writing this.

Wow! Thank you so much for the wonderful compliment! :D
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Fri Jul 22, 2011 8:43 pm
LiesOnLies says...



that's stupid that you have to delete your work on other site...if a site makes me delete my work from other sites it's not worth being part of that site.
  





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Sat Jul 23, 2011 2:06 am
LisaMCooper says...



Sorry. But they're paying me to post, so it isn't a matter of just joining a new site. It's a matter of getting paid to post and I kinda need the money. So again, I'm sorry that this seems like a bunch of bull, but, its the business I'm in.
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Sat Jul 23, 2011 4:24 am
LiesOnLies says...



I checked that site out and it seems that lyrics isn't something that they are paying for. They pay more for articles that are helpful to other people. You are able to post other writings, but they only pay for the articles they deem important.
So it really wasn't necessary to delete your work here...just thought that would help...but your'e still free to do as you will
  








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