Place of Crowds: Another song

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niteowl
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Fri Dec 31, 2004 9:02 pm
niteowl says... · Fri Dec 31, 2004 9:02 pm
I walk here
Everyday
And everything's
Always the same

They laugh and talk
Carrying on
I walk among them
In silence
Unknown

And now
They've all disappeared
Leaving me alone

It's so eerie
When they're gone
And the silence seems so wrong
Here in a place of crowds

Walking on their footprints
The echo seems so loud
When you're alone
In a place of crowds
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Sun Jan 23, 2005 1:32 am
randy says... · Sun Jan 23, 2005 1:32 am
Holy crap! (Is that a curse? I don't know).

These are great! I love the last couple of verses. This is frekain' excellent.
Bibamus, morturande est.
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Sun Jan 23, 2005 1:39 am
Tara says... · Sun Jan 23, 2005 1:39 am
It's beautifull, Tae! I love it! :D
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It's like everyone tells a story about themselves inside their own head. Always. All the time. That story makes you what you are. We build ourselves out of that story.
— Patrick Rothfuss, The Name of the Wind