Place of Crowds: Another song

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I walk here
Everyday
And everything's
Always the same

They laugh and talk
Carrying on
I walk among them
In silence
Unknown

And now
They've all disappeared
Leaving me alone

It's so eerie
When they're gone
And the silence seems so wrong
Here in a place of crowds

Walking on their footprints
The echo seems so loud
When you're alone
In a place of crowds




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Holy crap! (Is that a curse? I don't know).

These are great! I love the last couple of verses. This is frekain' excellent.
Bibamus, morturande est.




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It's beautifull, Tae! I love it! :D
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