I'm going to give this a shot, taking it easy, one poem everyday. I don't expect much from myself, but it would be nice to get something out of this. Hope to hear from all of you and good luck with your own NaPos.
Enjoy.
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Kylan wrote:#2 has lots of fun words, and several good images. "Genesis of citrus" is great. I'd suggest focusing less on the wordplay, tone down the verbosity maybe. Because viridescent doesn't do anything for me.
-Kylan
She is mine, I will crack and move the earth.
Have the heart of the earth swallow us up;
stain her lips pomegranate red and though the lonely
world will be bare without her grace, she will be mine.
slipping out their
secrets from teacup petals
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