z

Young Writers Society


full of phantoms



User avatar
105 Reviews



Gender: Male
Points: 33
Reviews: 105
Mon May 01, 2023 4:06 am
View Likes
fatherfig says...




do you think im a keyboard without keys
is that why when i insist theres a task ill complete
you laugh it off assume its untrue
try to outdue me at the things i will do

do you see me as a shoe without a mate
is that why you act as if some other pair
will be chosen over me
treat me like im worthless
soon to be discarded by whoever i meet

i see you as an anvil
not to be displaced
stony and expressionless
and always a weight
you cosplay as an anchor

maybe you want to be my rock
someone who will always be there
maybe you werent taught
that if you are someones rock
you shouldnt stone them when they
do something wrong
you should always be there when they fall
like a safety net but firmer
to catch them before they even have time to fall

i know you wont always be there
and i love you despite your faults
but i wont pretend it doesnt hurt
when all you see in me
are my own

we are both short to temper
but i have after thoughts
when you are stuck on yours
i forgive you

and you pick up everything i say
as if you are silently reciting
maranda rights, only you were never a cop
"i dont slay i slaughter, luke i am your father..." ~fatherfig
  





User avatar
1227 Reviews



Gender: Female
Points: 144125
Reviews: 1227
Mon May 01, 2023 9:20 am
View Likes
alliyah says...



Spoiler! :
Well done this month gem! Lots of emotionally-fueled and intense poems in here. One of my favorites of your last few has to be the hollow sycamore tree, such a simple thought, but really an interesting metaphor to use! <3 Happy NaPo!
you should know i am a time traveler &
there is no season as achingly temporary as now
but i have promised to return
  





User avatar
245 Reviews



Gender: Female
Points: 22538
Reviews: 245
Sat May 06, 2023 6:31 pm
View Likes
Spearmint says...



Spoiler! :
your poems are amazing as always, gem! <333
like, you manage to find new and interesting ways to piece words together, and aksdfa you're one of the best poets i know :3
maybe you werent taught
that if you are someones rock
you shouldnt stone them when they
do something wrong

^ just. ahh!
fantastic job this NaPo!! <333
mint, she/her


.--. / ... ...- -.-. .-.. / - .--. ..- .- / .--- --- ...- .--- / .--- --- .--. .-- / .--. .--- .-.. / .--- -.-- .-.. .... -
=D
  





User avatar
105 Reviews



Gender: Male
Points: 33
Reviews: 105
Sun May 07, 2023 5:17 am
View Likes
fatherfig says...



Spoiler! :
@alliyah @Spearmint thank you so much <333


i am a mixed bag; a segmented chimera
you may get the lion face and experience my futile bravery,
see the self assured mess i become,
or you may get poison spines and raised hackles, either way
soon you will discover i have a snakes silver tongue
covered in easily swallowed lies; i like to keep things digestible
i warn you now because i will eat you later.
you can look at me and see all this;

i am a red flag.

but sometimes if you look, instead of a monster
you will see a tired boy trying to be human again,
he doesn't like looking in the mirror anymore
because he sees a monster and it lives on in his nightmares
be warned he will likely capture you before you see him
lure you in and eat all of the good in you
so he can continue living
"i dont slay i slaughter, luke i am your father..." ~fatherfig
  





User avatar
105 Reviews



Gender: Male
Points: 33
Reviews: 105
Fri May 12, 2023 8:39 pm
View Likes
fatherfig says...




hello im supposed to ask about you now
so let me ask you a personal question
im sorry when was the last time you actually cared?
oh that was a bit aggressive, here is an explanation:
i messaged you every day for a week and you never looked,
and now im supposed to ask you how you feel- oops
and i'm so rude for talking about me now
i know this was supposed to be about you

so let me ask a few more questions-

do feel like a good person now that you've responded to me a week later?
i would hate for you to realize that doesnt make it better.
do feel proud that you left me in existential crisis?
if you were ashamed that sure would suck wouuldnt it.
are you happy you've communicated your nonchalance for my life?
i hope you are.

oh im sorry but im redirecting conversation flow again im such a narcisist one second-

why have i wasted all my time on you
so much energy directed at a stone wall
i once cared what you thought
so much that i tried to fit your standards
i have been severing my ties
i wish you a good life

ive been told im over dramatic
but if i cared about someone
i wouldnt ignore them

if you ever told me a reason i wouldnt be mad
but you dont even care enough for that
i want you to know this now

you wont see me back
now that ive turned my back
on you
"i dont slay i slaughter, luke i am your father..." ~fatherfig
  





User avatar
105 Reviews



Gender: Male
Points: 33
Reviews: 105
Tue May 16, 2023 8:33 am
View Likes
fatherfig says...



i lie here, eyes open
politics drift to my mind
i remember riots about skin color
and seeing old propaganda twisted at new targets
violence in the streets, burning and destroying monuments
arguing whose lives mattered more
and i remember being slapped in the face
getting hate comments
for believing they all mattered

i still believe they all matter
skin color is just an adaptation made long ago
to survive in harsh climates
like fur to mountain lions
in the age of heating, cooling, farming, and technology
skin color doesn't matter

as a race, we should move past discriminating against skin color
as quickly as we adapted past relying on it for survival
"i dont slay i slaughter, luke i am your father..." ~fatherfig
  








“Though lovers be lost, love shall not; And death shall have no dominion.”
— Dylan Thomas