Jade! You're first two poems look fantastic! I especially like the first one because you really dig down and pull out the emotions. The second one, as well, is really good. I liked this bit for sure: "Smiles are nostalgic, / We've forgot how to laugh, / We're unanimous in / A fear of tomorrow"
Your poems are beautiful! <3 Can't wait for more!
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