Sound, I think I'm just now having a chance to read through your NaPo thread additions and you have some really wonderful pieces here. I'm especially a fan of seven, ten, sixteen, nineteen, twenty-three and twenty-four! Even some of those short ones really pack a punch. You are really good at taking a very specific feeling and describing it in an original/imaginative way. And there are just some great lines all around - like the idea of dna circling around the universe, or pinching your nose to drown out the sound of rain!
Thanks for sharing your poetry! I'm excited to continue following what you write.
you should know i am a time traveler & there is no season as achingly temporary as now
More than anything she wanted the world to be uncomplicated, for right and wrong to be as easily divided as the black and white sections of an Oreo. But the world was not a cookie. — Roshani Chokshi, Aru Shah and the Tree of Wishes
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