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Rydia's Reservoir (has run dry)



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I've not written a poem since this time last year or nothing serious at least, but it's time to clamber down the crumbling castle steps and see if there's any water left in the reservoir.

2014 - Lost in Translation
2013 - Rydia's Repository
2012 - Sirens in Suburbia
2011 - April Showers
2010 - No idea what happened here
2009 - Here
2008 - First year?
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1. Closed Books

The closest to owning a library I ever came,
locked inside the second cubicle,
my heart turning like pages
as the books lay closed.


Spoiler! :
@Audy 's Day 1 prompt.

3 distant memories:

1. Almost getting locked in the school library toilets one night when I stayed too late.
2. Hollowing out the holly bush in the back garden to make a den.
3. The first time I went back to church after leaving the choir and feeling like an intruder.

3 things overheard (I've mostly been watching Walking Dead all day...)

1. We had to stop being out there
2. I never much liked you...until now
3. Silence.

It's dark outside the window except for a single porch light illuminating the rows of cars.
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I hate rondeaus sometimes...I'll attempt to finish this later. I'll attempt to edit this later.

2. The Dead Don't Die

As I was warned, the dead don't die,
the medical bills can testify,
they hold his name but I must pay
a second time for his delay
in leaving on a long goodbye.

When we make vows, we make a lie;
the dead can't leave us though they try,
their hearts give out, their minds give way,
the dead don't die.

Though winter roots and costs are high,
his chair remains and his reply
comes soft to me and stops halfway
between encroaching night and day,
to say he'll always be nearby,
the dead don't die.
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3. Who came this way?

Who came this way when I was dead
His place is at the school instead;
He will not see me stopping here
To watch his room fill up with red.

My little friend must think it rare
To find a body in his lair
Between the doll and lego bricks
The darkest evening of the year.

He gives his downy head a shake
To ask if there is some mistake.
The only answer I can peep
in inky words for him to take.

His angry eyes begin to weep,
But I have promises to keep
And even sisters need their sleep,
And even sisters need their sleep.

With inspiration from 'Stopping by Woods on a Snowy Evening' by Robert Frost.

Spoiler! :
Using the second prompt from @Audy - I took a poem I loved and tried to replicate the structure. Perhaps more loosely than the prompt requested but I decided to steal a line from each stanza to make up for it:

Whose woods these are I think I know.
His house is in the village though;
He will not see me stopping here
To watch his woods fill up with snow.

My little horse must think it queer
To stop without a farmhouse near
Between the woods and frozen lake
The darkest evening of the year.

He gives his harness bells a shake
To ask if there is some mistake.
The only other sound’s the sweep
Of easy wind and downy flake.

The woods are lovely, dark and deep,
But I have promises to keep,
And miles to go before I sleep,
And miles to go before I sleep.
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4. Two birds

I thought I'd killed the second bird
but the stone rolled away and it
breathed.

[One to come back to.]

5. Untitled

He was the sort of man who missed things:
hard-coded deadlines, his kid sister's rugby match,
the splatter of ink on his white, polo shirt.
He missed the wet paint as he stopped in front of the cafe
that served its last side of pumpkin pie
two months ago.

It was a Tuesday and he missed his train.
He stuttered around the platform,
his shoes leaving question marks
on the dark asphalt.
He put down the briefcase,
finally saw the ink butterfly
and dropped a tissue on the
station tracks.

He was boarding the next train
when she called him.
Later he'd claim it was for her he stopped
(and not the briefcase in her hand)
and later he'd miss her,
more than anything he'd ever missed.


[I need a title and I don't know if it ends too abruptly. Help?]

Spoiler! :
An @Audy prompt again! The day 3 prompt was right up my alley and it was nice sifting through old poems and half written ones. I went through three notebooks and gathered the following lines/ ideas (after passing up an ode to cheese):

'Don't bother about the plot - the plot's nothing'
'It was a Tuesday and he missed his train'
'Selling your baby teeth'
Thought - I don't have the experience to write poetry so does that automatically make me a worse poet than those who have had true suffering, who have seen with their own eyes instead of through the lens of education?
'They take your money but you have to find your way yourself' - bus drivers in the South is the context. New context?
'The days disappear/ I would launch an inquiry/ but I never could find the time'
'I can not fall between the hands of midnight'

I only used one in the end, but maybe I'll come back to these and get some more of my poems out of them!


I'm not sure how the poetry games will go this afternoon. I feel like I'm very much in a prose poetry kind of mood.
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Written with the aid of @ScarlettFire and @Tuesday. Some lines are not my own! (But which ones? :p)

6. Mountains

Where I come from, apples are sweeter than songs
with skin like rain kissed roses. The nymphs dance
against mountaintops and battle-worn valleys.

Then the painted ones came,
arrows hounded our plight
and all mountains are battles waiting to be fought
so we fought,
our laughter crashing like broken waves
as the hound killed the archer;
music to the ears of the mystical.
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7. Because I never learned the names of gemstones

I crush the glass between my palms
like ice breaking
under a microscope.
The sapphires spilling
out of my sighs
as I prize the cabinet a-
part.

This is the day I will swallow their tongue,
the feel of the opal as it rolls in my mouth.
The diaspores dispersing through my fingertips
as pyrites pirouette across the floor.

Obsidian, jasper, iolite.
Peridot, carnelian, alexandrite.

I will adorn myself in their alphabet,
traverse the rough and cloudy agate,
liaise with the lapis lazuli
and gaze upon the clear zirconia
as I navigate her shores.

Spoiler! :
@Audy Prompt 4 - A rather pathetic attempt but I have a pearl now? :p

Word bank:

Obsidian
Peridot
Alexandrite
Agate
Aquamarine
Carnelian
Diaspore
Iolite
Jasper
Lapis Lazuli
Pyrite
Topaz
Tiger's Eye
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WIP

She demanded to be in the room,
though not to expose my art
but to worship it.
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