Jealousy - made me laugh xD I luff haikus <3 The first line has an extra syllable, maybe you can fix it like: Jealousy: horrors most find within their hearts. If
To Start the Day - I love how this takes a slice of every day life, it's got a nice feel to it. A New Story had the same feel to it as well, and makes it personal because we can all relate to the writing process.
Interesting concept of the mirror telling the truth and a camera telling a lie. I like how you put it in the poem.
Personally I think both can lie exceptionally well, but really what tells the truth are your own thoughts in the end
Trust in God and all else follows.
Deanie, dominating the world since it was cool @Pompadour, 2014 Your username reminds me of a hotdog @Stegosaurus, 2015 Tried to make puns out of your username, but every attempt has been Deanied @Candywizard, 2015
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