(why do you not title these, Sarg?)
I think it's because titling feels like the last thing you should do when you feel it's complete; it's like putting the wrapping paper or bow on the box. It has to sum up the whole idea with the right attitude and feel. None of these are complete, save for the one I went out of my way to title, Regarding Quitting.
Your opinions just further prove my/everybody's point that you have to care intimately about what you're writing about for it to be considered good. The "night escape" one and the "burning smoke signal blanket" one were the only ones actually truly true to my life. (first hand story leads to positive opinion)
I stole my dad's stories and experience as a neighborhood militia 16-year-old with a tommy gun for the war ones. (So second hand story leads to neutral opinion)
The rest...yeah...you know. Filler.
(nth hand story leads to negative opinion)Did my Philosophical Rap blow your mind?
Thanks a lot for your input! It's never too late, ey?
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