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Mon Jan 20, 2014 7:15 pm
Willard says...



Count me in. No Heavy Metal or Rock. Possibly either CAKE or Watsky. Any other would be fine

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Wed Jan 22, 2014 12:42 am
FatCowsSis says...



@SaraiRayne your song is Everything is Cool by NeverShoutNever

@Storybraniac your song is Hurricane by Brigit Mendler. The idea is to take a song and base a poem off of it in some way. Please don't turn the song into a poem.

@ERZA your song is Rebel Beat by the Goo Goo Dolls.

@Strange, your song is The Distance by CAKE
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Thu Jan 30, 2014 7:03 pm
Spotswood says...



hey, I am interested in the contest as well. Nothing modern or pop. While I'd be content with any good classic rock song, I'd probably like to do some Floyd. You can pick though. THere's more to them than just Dark Side of the Moon
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Tue Feb 04, 2014 12:55 am
rhiasofia says...



Me, me, me! I'd love to do this. I love The Beatles, Rolling Stones, Ed Sheeran, Kate Nash, Florence + the Machine, Lily Allen, and Never Shout Never. Pretty much anything not country, really.
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Tue Feb 04, 2014 1:26 am
FatCowsSis says...



@Spotswood I"M SOOOOOO SORRY!!! I didn't see your response till now O_O Hmmmmm, not modern. Well, I don't see this being your thing, but I'm going to give you Bohemian Rhapsody by Mnozil Brass. It's a bit.....different. If you don't like it I can change it! Most people think it's really weird...

@rhiasofia HIIII! I've been seeing you everywhere lately! Your song is Eleanor Rigby by the Beatles.
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Tue Feb 04, 2014 1:47 am
rhiasofia says...



Thanks! I love you for choosing that one :D
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Tue Feb 04, 2014 1:57 am
FatCowsSis says...



No prob! I played it in orchestra and it was the first that popped into mind!
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Sun Feb 09, 2014 8:41 pm
rhiasofia says...



Ode to Eleanor

It is done!
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Sun Feb 09, 2014 9:01 pm
niteowl says...



I posted mine a while back but I wasn't sure about editing it. As it is I probably won't have time so here it is.

No One Ever Makes It
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DukeofWonderland says...



Okay, at long last here's my entry. It's on the song Secrets by One Republic. I tried to make it a villanelle, don't know how well that went though.

Flakes

My skin is just flakes
Shrouding the secrets that make me whole -
So, from the truth, I can continue to escape.

Metamorphosing at every chance I can take,
I reform myself because I know
My skin is just flakes.

With each new persona, each new mask I create;
After every shedding, every bleeding of my secrets: I feel hope-
So, from the truth, I can continue to escape.

My fear of being forgotten, becoming the ordinary, the sane -
Helps keep my facade on, as my soul disintegrates. I still go on, though
My skin is just flakes.

This honest dishonesty has kept me from becoming a forgotten fate.
All the secrets they would hurdle to hear, keep me from getting bored.
So, from the truth, I can continue to escape.

Sometimes, even I doubt all my pretense. Now it's become all I hate.
And as a somebody, who is a real nobody I roam.
My skin is just flakes,
So, from the truth, I can continue to escape.
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regularly went cuckoo."
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Mon Mar 24, 2014 10:55 pm
FatCowsSis says...



Hey all! For those who have not submitted their poems...SUBMIT THEM! (I can't say that any nicer. :P)

@Aley @SecreteJournalist
PM me me & I'll send you guys what you need.

EVERYONE
I'll post winners once we judges have done our judging. But it's kinda hard to judge when we don't have anything to judge, yes?
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