MoonlightMayhem wrote:Woah. This is pretty intense. I kind of got scared, honestly, when thinking of how horrifying a monster Ellipse would be through a main character's eyes.You have very creative creature ideas... it's pretty cool. But he seems very plain and simple. I guess it's in a good way. After seeing your characters... I'm inspired to try some of my own character making. Your great with backstories and your characters are very unique.As for Ellipse... did you mention that human teeth help him survive/ give him power? Or does he detect them or something? I kind of lost ya there with the "Tooth Fairy" concept. Do explain, though! I'm interested.I see that this could be a very vicious character... I think I'll create a more peaceful one with the same amount of intrigue. I'm thinking more about dragons, wizards, supernatural humans, and mages. Perhaps even a few blends of many creatures in one, or something like that. Having a character with a misunderstood backstory is a really good idea, though. I want to try that.
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