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Thu Feb 24, 2022 2:56 pm
MailicedeNamedy
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That´s the issue with poems. I don´t know what´s considered good or not good, because a poem can be anything.
Reality is a prison and time is its guard
I´m just a random girl with gentle manners
Every bad voice in your head was once outside
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Thu Feb 24, 2022 2:57 pm
NewHope
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So look at flow, good metaphor, where you are hooked, where you aren’t.
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Thu Feb 24, 2022 2:58 pm
MailicedeNamedy
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I´ve tried to write a poem, and I went to far into metaphors.
Reality is a prison and time is its guard
I´m just a random girl with gentle manners
Every bad voice in your head was once outside
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Points: 155
Reviews: 30
Thu Feb 24, 2022 2:59 pm
NewHope
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Don’t overthink. That is the whole thing with poems. Write and work on the structure etc. as you write.
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Thu Feb 24, 2022 3:00 pm
MailicedeNamedy
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Yeah, I prefer novels. Blunt raw novels.
Reality is a prison and time is its guard
I´m just a random girl with gentle manners
Every bad voice in your head was once outside
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Points: 155
Reviews: 30
Thu Feb 24, 2022 3:00 pm
NewHope
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Hehehe. Horrifying novels?
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Thu Feb 24, 2022 3:01 pm
MailicedeNamedy
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I don´t know. Nobody could ever finish them.
Reality is a prison and time is its guard
I´m just a random girl with gentle manners
Every bad voice in your head was once outside
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Reviews: 30
Thu Feb 24, 2022 3:01 pm
NewHope
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And what if I do?
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Thu Feb 24, 2022 3:02 pm
MailicedeNamedy
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Then you get 10.000 points from me.
Reality is a prison and time is its guard
I´m just a random girl with gentle manners
Every bad voice in your head was once outside
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Points: 155
Reviews: 30
Thu Feb 24, 2022 3:04 pm
NewHope
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I’m going to remember that. Quote you on my wall or something. Do you promise?
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Thu Feb 24, 2022 3:06 pm
MailicedeNamedy
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Yeah, but my story isn´t fully published yet here on YWS. Only 16 of 21 chapters. But you could start.
Reality is a prison and time is its guard
I´m just a random girl with gentle manners
Every bad voice in your head was once outside
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Reviews: 30
Thu Feb 24, 2022 3:08 pm
NewHope
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I’m on 2. You need to start reviewing!
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Thu Feb 24, 2022 3:10 pm
MailicedeNamedy
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What two? 2 Reviews?
Reality is a prison and time is its guard
I´m just a random girl with gentle manners
Every bad voice in your head was once outside
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Reviews: 30
Thu Feb 24, 2022 3:13 pm
NewHope
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I’ve posted my prologue and two chapters!
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Thu Feb 24, 2022 3:13 pm
MailicedeNamedy
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I will read it from March 1st onwards.
Reality is a prison and time is its guard
I´m just a random girl with gentle manners
Every bad voice in your head was once outside
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