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D+. Please re-sit.
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Em, Poppi, I think he was trying to test something out. I don't think you have to reply to it.
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Yeah I know. I was just kidding around.
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She can if she wants. If he has locked it, then you know you can't. Let her. ;)




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Quite funny, though.

Maybe Nate posted this to see what we, as members, would do?

Experiment?
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Well I think he fails. And must re-sit. Or lunchtime detention and 500 lines.
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Watch it...you're insulting the admin...

Joking. ;)
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The admin had obviously not revised very well!
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I liked the first stanza, the TEST really opened up the poem pretty well.
And the last line was wonderful, fabulous imagery and ending to the poem.

This was so beautiful, I think I'm going to cry.
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Ah I disagree completely. The admin showed misuse of punctuation, and overuse of capital letters. I also thought his vocabulary was lacking.
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But it's just plain THERE.

TEST

Wonderfully spoken!
How can you say such a thing.
I cry for you, dear Poppi.
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you two have way too much time on your hands
~The bandit’s body slumped to the ground, knees hitting first,followed by the rest.His dead weight pushed dust into the air in a swirling cloud.The blood flowed from his head,splicing like river canals,delaying slightly on pebbles before flowing on through the street.~




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Darn right you are. Life in sunny Cornwall... just lazing around... eating... wasting time... aaaaah the country loife *shooes away pet pig*
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HEY!! That be MY pig!

Why you be a-theivin' at my stock??... Darn Mawganites.... *mutters to self*
Oh the trees!
Take me back to London please!!!



That's just what translation is, I think. That's all speaking is. Listening to the other and trying to see past your own biases to glimpse what they're trying to say. Showing yourself to the world, and hoping someone else understands.
— Ramy (Babel by R. F. Kuang)