James Patterson's Maximum Ride series.
Those books broke my heart. Thing is, the idea's pretty good and the characters have room for some seriously interesting flaws, if only he'd bother to develop them.
Instead, he chose to mass-produce books with a "good message," aimed the series toward tweens/younger teens, and digressed hugely from the original plot line. I still muck around in the fandom, but I just wish the concept for MR had been given to a better writer. The books are full of plot holes, don't make sense, don't follow any sort of timeline, and have no character development whatsoever.
Just because you're writing for teens doesn't mean you can write books that require the antithesis of thought, Mr. Patterson.
/rant
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