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Napoleonic Fiction (untitled)



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Sun Apr 03, 2005 11:47 pm
Sam says...



The update is pretty good...not much else to say besides that.
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Mon Apr 04, 2005 10:14 pm
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New update again!

Thanks everyone for reading, by the way, I appreciate it.
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Tue Apr 05, 2005 1:46 am
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hey, Jack, could you start a new post sometime? It's kind of a hassle when you just have to look somthing up in a hurry to critique on and you have to back up quite a ways. I'll critique in a moment...hang on...
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Tue Apr 05, 2005 11:44 am
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*sigh* Maybe I will. Its just I dunno...I don't like starting new posts. It makes me look like I'm trying to get points or something. But I will, just for you.
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Tue Apr 05, 2005 12:15 pm
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yay!

(another example of trying to get points heehee)
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Tue Apr 05, 2005 12:21 pm
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'it’s partner on the opposite side'

that's the only thing i caught. 'Its'. Oh, and...

"...hard as buggery" and then the portuguese guy laughs. I'm not really sure about European culture, but he proboably wouldn't laugh at something. US/British culture is pretty much the same, but I wouldn't know what the heck you said. So, a Portuguese guy wouldn't get it much, either.
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Thu Apr 07, 2005 8:54 pm
Harley says...



I loved it! It was amazing; just, like, wow. I think the date is a good thing, because I've only done four months of history this year, and three last year, and we've done NOTHING on napoleon and stuff. I can tell you the time period and that's about it. I think the portugese guy would understand "...hard as buggery" because i've been there, and they understand lots of common slang phrases as well as standard English, but maybe I'm wrong, cuz the time period is different. Right, well I'm away to read part, two. Great job, jack. :D
  








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