The Last Halloween at Desolate Creek
Chapter 1
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The gruesome stench lingered for days, turning even the strongest of stomachs. Very few words can even begin to describe it. A thick cloud of flies accompanied the odor. When putting two and two together, one can imagine only two things, death and decay.
“John, when are you gonna throw that thing out?” asked my Mom, “ It reeks! I told you it was too early to carve it!” she added, looking down at the rotten remains of the family pumpkin. She was right.. as usual. It was only October 20, and the pumpkin was a moldy pile of brown and orange mush.
Ever since I could remember I was always excited about Halloween. I would have the decorations up before the stores even sold costumes! I love everything about it, from the candy, costumes, decorations, to the haunted hay rides and parties. So it wasn't unlike me to, in the midst of anticipation, carve the pumpkin the first week of October.
Needless to say I'm a kid at heart, the only thing thats changed about me is my size. I'm still that 3 foot, 6 year old tyke hauling the decorations across the lawn. Only now I'm almost 6 ft. and going on 16..
I trashed what was left of the pumpkin, and walked to the corner of the street to wait for my friends.
As usual, Alex was the first one to turn the corner. He was a little on the heavy side, with short, faded brown hair, blue eyes, and his trademark crooked glasses.
“Hey white bread!” He chuckled.
“Whats up smush!” I replied, “Listen we gotta go buy a pumpkin from somewhere, the other one started to rot.. 2 weeks ago..”
“Patience is a virtue” he reminded me. “Where's Joe?”
“I'll give him a call” I assured him.
After a few rings, a raspy congested voice answered the phone, “Hello?”
“Joe, you coming today?” I asked
”Can't I've got a sinus infection.. again” Joe complained.
“Damn it. Feel better Joe” I said, glancing over to Alex to find a look of disappointment.
“*sniffle* thanks..”.
I hung up and started down the street. Alex followed behind scrolling through his iPod.
“Which farm you wanna' to go to white bread?” Alex asked.
“I was thinking Desolate Creek Acreage” I replied.
“John, didn't that burn down in 2003?” he continued.
“Well, the house did, I remember that, it was horrible, you could see the smoke from miles away. And, almost everyone living there died. The oldest son survived though, I heard he got burned, bad, but he still manages the field every autumn.” I told Alex.
We cut through the woods, it was like a graveyard for dead and leaves. Maneuvering around the natural debris was a challenge alone, and inevitably we lost our sense of direction.
“I think we're lost” I confessed.
A concerned look of agreement was all I got back from Alex. Although aware of the time, I couldn't shake the feeling of darkness creeping up on us early, its a helpless feeling.
Almost instinctively, like Soldiers on deployment day, the hair on my neck stood tall.
My gut was pleading I turn around.. but we continued..
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