This is just the beginning exert that I wrote. There is much more to this chapter then this little bit, but this is what I have written confidently so far. Thanks for reading, please comment, and hope you enjoy it!
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Crash after crash; swooping in to take its prey of sand out to sea. The ocean was darkened from years of pollution. The beach was barely ten feet long between the shore and the waves’s extending arms.
The deserted beach satisfied the needs of its lone occupant who visited in hopes of finding a glimpse of the beautiful, clean past they had once lived. Or at least had imagined.
“Jay, you can’t change it back by looking at it!” called a familiar voice.
Jay stood still not even looking towards the newcomer but rather towards the horizon. It was not its same self. No sun could be seen going to bed after a long day neither could a rising moon be seen welcoming the night. All that was left was smog.
“What do you want Carter, it’s my day off?” asked Jay.
“Your needed at the base,” replied Carter.
“You know my mom used to write about this place all the time,” Jay explained, ignoring Carter. “She wrote that even when she was young you could see the color of the water changing, but then on some days it was clear as the night sky.” Jay paused. “Well, I guess not our night sky.”
Jay turned around to face Carter, amused by her own words. “You know I would love to see what the bottom of the ocean looked like, but…”
“But what?” asked Carter.
Jay looked back towards the open waters as if looking for the right words to say. Smiling, Jay began to turn her back on the shore and walked towards Carter.
“But people don’t think about those things anymore,” she sighed. “The world has never been the same since this accursed war. Come on Carter I won’t keep those military busy buddies waiting any longer.” Jay patted Carter on the back as she walked by.
“Yes, sir,” agreed Carter with a smile.
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Side note: Jay and Carter are both female. More is explained later.
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