Part one of Planet Hell has been wrewriten lower down in the forums.
The man rearranged the cubelets on the old cube and then twisted the faces at a blurring speed until the faces were all the same color. He turned the cube over a couple of times and stared at a logo reading "Rubik's Cube". He sighed and rearranged the cube once more.
"How do you do that?" another man asked.
"Well, you build one side and the first layer then you build up like a build-"
"Yea like a building i know, but how do you do it so fast?" he asked as he snatched teh cube from the first man.
"I memorized the algorithms, thats all there is to it." he replied with a half hearted grab at the cube.
"why go through the trouble when you could just do this", as he talked he had turned the top face and popped out one of the small cubes.
"But that'd be cheating", a third man said, "but you can turn you're little cube, me i'll stick to this" he lifted his rifle and shook it a little with a boyish grin on his face, "besides no one thinks thats any cool."
"No one thinks youre mom is any cool either", the first man said, "at least she wasn't in bed last week" the man said with a grin. The third man raised a hand but was inturrupted by a stern, commanding voice-
"Lets MOVE!" the harsh voice shattered the men out of their short reprive. The sargeant stood in the doorway, "this ain't a pie eatin' contest; we got ground to cover. Suit up!"
The first man snatched the cube out of the second man's hands and dropped it in a light leather bag. The third man tossed him a grey bucket from the bench where it had been sitting. The helmet covered the whole head with a tinted visor in a T shape to allow some vission, his was speacially tailored to allow maximum vision capability. He slid the helmet on over a mane of dark hair and latched it to the rest of his outfit. He was wearing a suit of leather with overlapping canvas covered porcelain slabs. They had raided an old Police Station and picked up some law inforcement material and some other things. what they wore now was a more effective and lighter version of what military and long term law enforcement had worn before it got cold.
He walked out of the room to the sight of a wasteland. Snow blanketed teh landscape for miles. Trees, tall evergreens sprouted from the blanket and rose to the sky in a tangle of twisted towers. The unforgivable environment gazed back at him with a vengence, as if it knew who he was what he was and what the people before him had done to this world. This would be one hell ov'a run. It was ironic, as a child the man had never considered ice to be in abundance on one of the nine planes.
"You ready boy?" the Sarg. said.
"As eady as i ever will be sir"- the seargent just nodded.
"Hey Mike?" the third man addressed the first.
"Yea, the first man, named Mike, replied.
"I think I need an some medicine-"
"What,for that grotesque face that stares back at you in you're face mask Kevin?" Mike inturupted.
The second man let out a bark of laughter and replied, "at least i dont need amy Morphine for your face, that helmet does a good job of keeping things that the sun shouldn't shine on hidden."
Music blared into Mike's ears as he thumbed up the volume on the ipod implanted in his helmet. The second man emerged from the House and the four men started slowly down the hill. Mike walked to the tune of "Highway to Hell" as they descended into Hade's Valley; into Planet Hell.
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