Nobles and Beggars *Chapters 1-3*

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So, this work of mine has expanded enough to be considered the makings of a novel. Instead of re-posting each chapter again into the novels section, or just posting one HUGE block of text, I've decided to make a portal of sorts to my chapters.
In other words, click on a link below and you'll be re-directed to a part of my novel. Simple? I sure hope so. :)

[Just as a reminder, all of these contain very strong language, therefore the 18+ rating]

Chapter 1: topic74432.html


Chapter 2: topic74517.html


Chapter 3: topic74587.html


Chapter 3 (Continued): topic74785.html

Hope you enjoy! ^^
(Should I just post them seperately, or is this okay with you?)
Call me crazy; I prefer 'enjoys life while one can'.
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I honestly think you should post them separately. People don't usually like to have to review like 2-3 chapters at the same time.

Also, when posting chapters for a novel, you should always give the people reading it time to follow. What I mean is, post your first chapter, then wait a couple of days before posting the next one. Don't shoot out three chapters at the same time, or you risk losing the people that wanted to follow your story. And I mean that for all of your chapters.

But since I'm in the mood to review, I'm going to go review your chapters :P lol
But I really believe that you should separate your chapters and "make" your novel so people can just View your novel and see all your chappies there. :)
Got a story you'd like reviewed?
topic75101.html

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Alright, I guess I'll do just that then. ^^ I was just thinking that it would seem, ah, I can't find a word for it. As I've already posted them (just in a different section), posting them again seems... comment-whoring - if you get my meaning.

But if you think it better that way, I'll get to posting them.
Thanks,
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Call me crazy; I prefer 'enjoys life while one can'.
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The pen's mightier than the sword - especially when it's wielded by a flipmothering dragon.
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No problem. I really do think it would be better, especially as your chapters are still in short stories.
If you go in the tab Submit, you can learn how to post a novel. That way, when people see a chapter of yours, whether it's #4 or #27, they can click on View Novel and check out your novel as well as all your chapters in one shot. Definitely worth making a novel! ;)
Got a story you'd like reviewed?
topic75101.html

Punctuation is the difference between "Let's eat, Grandma" and "Let's eat Grandma".



while she was studying the ways of pasta he was studying the ways of the sword
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