Nobles and Beggars *Chapters 1-3*

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So, this work of mine has expanded enough to be considered the makings of a novel. Instead of re-posting each chapter again into the novels section, or just posting one HUGE block of text, I've decided to make a portal of sorts to my chapters.
In other words, click on a link below and you'll be re-directed to a part of my novel. Simple? I sure hope so. :)

[Just as a reminder, all of these contain very strong language, therefore the 18+ rating]

Chapter 1: topic74432.html


Chapter 2: topic74517.html


Chapter 3: topic74587.html


Chapter 3 (Continued): topic74785.html

Hope you enjoy! ^^
(Should I just post them seperately, or is this okay with you?)
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I honestly think you should post them separately. People don't usually like to have to review like 2-3 chapters at the same time.

Also, when posting chapters for a novel, you should always give the people reading it time to follow. What I mean is, post your first chapter, then wait a couple of days before posting the next one. Don't shoot out three chapters at the same time, or you risk losing the people that wanted to follow your story. And I mean that for all of your chapters.

But since I'm in the mood to review, I'm going to go review your chapters :P lol
But I really believe that you should separate your chapters and "make" your novel so people can just View your novel and see all your chappies there. :)
Got a story you'd like reviewed?
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Alright, I guess I'll do just that then. ^^ I was just thinking that it would seem, ah, I can't find a word for it. As I've already posted them (just in a different section), posting them again seems... comment-whoring - if you get my meaning.

But if you think it better that way, I'll get to posting them.
Thanks,
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No problem. I really do think it would be better, especially as your chapters are still in short stories.
If you go in the tab Submit, you can learn how to post a novel. That way, when people see a chapter of yours, whether it's #4 or #27, they can click on View Novel and check out your novel as well as all your chapters in one shot. Definitely worth making a novel! ;)
Got a story you'd like reviewed?
topic75101.html

Punctuation is the difference between "Let's eat, Grandma" and "Let's eat Grandma".



Go in fear of abstractions.
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