Chasing Rainbows Chapter 1 Revised

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yelhsa211
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Wed Jun 04, 2008 10:12 pm
yelhsa211 says... · Wed Jun 04, 2008 10:12 pm
Very good story, I thought. This is one of the first ones I have personally read, and I am not disappointed. There were some mistakes, though, with the punctuation. Some spelling errors were in the mix. Other than that, I really loved your story!
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alwaysawriter
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Mon Jul 14, 2008 6:38 pm
alwaysawriter says... · Mon Jul 14, 2008 6:38 pm
Some punctation errors but everyone covered everything already. It was a good story. I liked the conflict. Anyway, good job. :)
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