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My Prologue



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Fri Apr 22, 2005 5:47 pm
mysterywriter says...



i enjoyed it. i would give you grammar tips but i myself am not that great when it comes to grammar. :lol: one suggestion i will give you is: put quotation marks around the sentence when your characters are speaking.

"hey!" she exclaimed. (like that.)

sorry if someone already said this and i missed it. 8)
  








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