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Harry potter (yrs 5-7)



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Tue Jan 15, 2019 3:10 pm
FireSpyGirl says...



((@Fantascifi66, here we go! We'll start on the train))
"Those moments when your in so deep, it feels easier to just swim down"

"I'm erasing myself from the narrative. Let future historians wonder how Eliza reacted when you broke her heart





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Tue Jan 15, 2019 3:19 pm
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((K. Same characters?))
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Tue Jan 15, 2019 3:35 pm
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((Yep!))

Lyssa trudged through the train, trying to find an empty compartment, waiting for Lee. She finally found one and put her trunk in the luggage rack.
"Those moments when your in so deep, it feels easier to just swim down"

"I'm erasing myself from the narrative. Let future historians wonder how Eliza reacted when you broke her heart





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Tue Jan 15, 2019 3:36 pm
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"Hiiiii!!!"
Lee screamed at her, standing outside of the compartment.
Weird as ever, if not even weirder.
"Had a good break?"
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Tue Jan 15, 2019 3:41 pm
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Lyssa hugged her friend. "Definitely better than most. I stayed with Hermione, and got a lot of letters from Fred." She laughed.


(They are soo together in these years!))
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"I'm erasing myself from the narrative. Let future historians wonder how Eliza reacted when you broke her heart





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Tue Jan 15, 2019 3:47 pm
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((... Wasn't Hermione at headquarters? Or...? Maybe not.))
"Oh, what did he write?" She asked, eager to hear it.
This was no surprise to either, but she did not have a boyfriend (Or a girlfriend for that matter), and had no plans whatsoever on getting one.
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Tue Jan 15, 2019 3:49 pm
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((Oh shoot. That's right. I'm sorry, I'm just so tired and confused. Scratch that part then.))

"Not much. That's fine though. These are hard times." Her eyes grew troubled. "My marks have been hurting a lot. They're darker as well."
"Those moments when your in so deep, it feels easier to just swim down"

"I'm erasing myself from the narrative. Let future historians wonder how Eliza reacted when you broke her heart





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Fri Jan 18, 2019 4:31 pm
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((@Fantasscifi66))
"Those moments when your in so deep, it feels easier to just swim down"

"I'm erasing myself from the narrative. Let future historians wonder how Eliza reacted when you broke her heart





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Fri Jan 18, 2019 4:35 pm
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"That must hurt. I'm sorry. But at least you had a home for the holidays!" She said, smiling at Lyssa.
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Fri Jan 18, 2019 4:39 pm
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Lyssa smiled and nodded. "I'm sooo looking forward to this year! What about you? I wonder who the Defense against the dark arts teacher will be."
"Those moments when your in so deep, it feels easier to just swim down"

"I'm erasing myself from the narrative. Let future historians wonder how Eliza reacted when you broke her heart





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Fri Jan 18, 2019 4:44 pm
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"Yeah, me too. Although, I don't, really. I know who it's going to be, and I think you'll quite like it. Or not. Actually, I think you won't." She said, sitting down onto on of the seats.
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Fri Jan 18, 2019 4:47 pm
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Lyssa nodded, sitting down. She trusted Lee. Possibly the only other person she trusted as much as Lee was Fred. "We;ll have to wait and see then."
"Those moments when your in so deep, it feels easier to just swim down"

"I'm erasing myself from the narrative. Let future historians wonder how Eliza reacted when you broke her heart





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Fri Jan 18, 2019 4:58 pm
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"Yeah. But I have to warn you, she looks like a toad." Lee said, taking a snack bar out of one of the pockets in her clothes.
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Fri Jan 18, 2019 5:04 pm
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Lyssa couldn't help giggling. "I get the feeling she's awful, but at the same time, someone is going to have fun with that."
"Those moments when your in so deep, it feels easier to just swim down"

"I'm erasing myself from the narrative. Let future historians wonder how Eliza reacted when you broke her heart








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I always knew that deep down in every human heart, there is mercy and generosity. No one is born hating another person because of the color of his skin, or his background, or his religion. People must learn to hate, and if they can learn to hate, they can be taught to love, for love comes more naturally to the human heart than its opposite.
— Nelson Mandela, Long Walk to Freedom