Young Writers Society

Again...i rushed the hair, i should really stop doing that, its a bad habit. A little satisfied with this although i know i need to improve on my shading.

You should be happy with it--sure--and if you're satisfied with it, then good. You know what you need to work on, but I'm going to talk about it anyway. Sorry.

I think the eyes are beautiful. The only thing is that they are not focusing on the same thing...One is slightly off-center.

Um...shading. One thing I like using is an eraser. Have you ever cut off a piece of eraser with a knife so it's thin and floppy and flexible? You can use it to lighten areas that are too dark, but you can control it, and it also gives a smoothness. Like on her nose, I would brush some places with the eraser to give some more highlights. I think it needs to be lighter. Some of your sketch lines are a little harsh, only because you haven't shaded around them ie. corners of her mouth and shirt/colorbone? (what is that?) Could you try to make the lips a little smoother looking?

You're very talented. This is a nice piece of work. You should be happy with it.

Did I see another one of yours?

~Jacquie~

Well, I can definately recognize this as Alicia Silverstone, so congrats! Nicely done.

Woweee i like it. Yeah, you can definately tell who it is. The only thing that needs changing in my opinion is the hair beside her chin/cheek. But you already knew that . smashing stuff *thumbs up*

I like this and recognised her straight away. But the right eye (for the viewers) just doesn't look right and the hair is a bit messed up. And the shading on the forehead should be a little lighter.

I can't see it!