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Fri Feb 20, 2009 9:05 pm
velvetnight1313 says...



Hope you enjoy my drawing. :D
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Fri Feb 20, 2009 9:22 pm
Shauni says...



Hi there! This is really cool. I like the coloring, it's really smooth. The structure could be better, it doesn't flow like a rose. It's really nice and keep going because it's beautiful!!


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Sat Feb 21, 2009 12:27 am
TexanWriter says...



I think this is really nice!

Colors:
The colors are great. In the petals you have nicely blended the light and red. Very nicely done.

Smoothness:
The lines are smooth where they need to be, and sharper where they need to be. I love the fluidness of the petals. Great job!

Other:
Okay, I have one nit-pick; The sharp angles of the stem. I think they are a little unrealistic.

Overall, I give a 8/10.

-Continue drawing! Tex
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