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Fri Feb 13, 2009 10:12 pm
anti-pop says...



I finally did it, June! :D

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I resized it a little so that it would fit on the page. It's actually a lot bigger. ^_^
I'm only half-way through coloring it, so when that's finished I'll add it here. Hope you like it!


Here's the original:
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changing holds
cynicism the new norm...

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Sat Feb 14, 2009 1:08 am
Juniper says...



Aww! It's Mushu! *hugs little red guy*

Well done, well done! I'm debating now whether I should be super nitpicky or absolutely un-nitpicky since I love him so much.

Now... to see it colored...

He's so cuuute! May I please print your drawing and put it on my wall? :D


<3
June
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Sat Feb 14, 2009 2:26 am
Rosendorn says...



I've just got two little nit-picks for you, but other then that he's amazing!

The first nit pick: the neck is a bit off. It's a bit too short in your drawing and it's a little straiter then it should be.

The second nit-pick: The shading on the tips of the ears is a bit much. The picture only has half that amount. However, if you cover that up with colour it will be all good. ^_^

Nice work!
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Sat Feb 14, 2009 3:05 am
MeadowLark says...



Oh wow. That's awesome! You're an excellent artist!

It's pretty close to what the original looked like. Keep up the good work. Can't wait to see what it looks like coloured!
Purple light in the canyon
that is where I long to be
With my three good companions
just my rifle, pony and me

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