Young Writers Society

Cerberus! What a cutie
I would definitely keep him as a pet.
(Sorry if the quality isn't great...my scanner isn't the best)

So, my younger brother just bought this 'How To Draw Mythical Creatures' art book and I was bored, so I decided to take a shot at it. Just followed the step-by-step instructions.
Quite easy, actually
The legs turned out a little wonky, though...

Really Cool!! The back hind legs seem really weak though.

This looks amazing! I could never hope to draw this well in my entire life! However, the eye of the head on the left looks a little bit strange. It makes it look like the head is yawning. I also loved the way you drew the fur. It makes it look...bristly and stuff. Great work!

Well, I don't know if you changed it or something, but I don't see it! When it becomes visible, i'd love to critique it!

Nice and scary...like the shading.

The aggressive stance is cool too.

So is the snake tail!

Wow! That is sooooooo good.

The quality is just fine

I really like the snake tail. It's very realistic. I don't remember Cerberus having a snake tail traditionally, though... oh well. It makes him cooler.

Maybe you should shade in the claws a bit more. I can see the lines from when you originally drew his paw. It makes the claws look transparent.

So awesome!

OOO! Dramatic!

The snake is really good, and I don't have anything to say about that.

The back leg that we can see looks sort of disconnected. I would make the thigh go into the stomache a little bit more, or bring the line forward a bit. Does that make sense?

The head on our far left is a little off. It's nose looks diconnected and smaller than the others. Also the snout curves down a little too much, I think. It makes him look sort of rat-like.

The middle head's teeth sort of bother me. The other two have individual teeth (the one closest to us is amazing!) but it just sort of has little jags. Give him the finer teeth, too.
It's right front leg sort of disappears. I think we should see a little tip of its paw behind the other leg. Or maybe a claw, or something.

Other than that, I loved it. You gave a good contrast between the texture of the fur and that of the snake's scales.
And yes, he looks very cuddly!

-Sea-

Epic.
You are quite right, the legs are a little wonky, but I love the idea of Cerberus. He is one of my favourite mythical creatures. My favourite head is the third from the left. And the snake is just awesome.
The fur/skin could use some more detail.
And the porportions... well I can't critque those because I really don't know how too.
Other wise, excellent.

Wow Anti-pop! You did a good job here!!

It could be a bit more detailed, but put that aside, it's good. Cerberus used to be the worst mythical creature to me. I absolutely loathed them. I had nightmares about them. -shudders-

Anyway! A good drawing. What are you NOT good at? o.O You write stories and poetry well, and you draw well. Good, good job.

10/10

Good job Anti! Keep it up!

xxJune

this drawing is way better the anything i could of done but, a predator has a slimmer waist, after you draw the chest the stomach doesn't curve into the hind legs

This is pure awesomeness!!!
I love it; especially the tail...very nice.
You mind coloring it in?

Hey anti-pop.

I really like the ferocious expression of Cerberus. You captured it quite nicely. I think it's because of its teeth and eyes lol. I have a problem with the middle mouth though. It seems unrealistic since the teeths have very similar shapes and forms. Have a look at the third head (furthest to the right). The teeth have more variety in shape and seems more realistically drawn rather than just being triangles (which is what the second mouth's set of teeth were like).

Overall though, really nice.

Ooh, I liked the snake's head. Really, that was pretty cool.

His heads look wolf-like (the expressions on them are pure win, my friend), but his body reminds me of a fat cat. I think that's because of the way the waist doesn't suck back in towards the hind legs and is also helped by the claws, which are long, thin and sharp like a cat's, rather than being short and dull like a dog's.

The middle head seems to be a bit disjointed, like it's not actually connected to anything. It sort of looks like it's just floating there. Perhaps a bit of a line underneath it suggesting a neck connecting it to the rest of the body? I guess that's one of the troubles of drawing a multi-headed critter. You've pulled it off well overall.

Very nice. I really, really like all the heads' expressions. Suitably ferocious for the guardian of Hades.

*thumbs up*

~GryphonFledgling

This is a really good drawing. I think the far left head's jaw needs some work, though. The head on the right is incredible, though. The snake for a tail is a nice touch.

I've got only one criticism: the head in profile view has too round of a mouth. That's it, though. It is so cool! I draw, and now you're making me want to pull out my sketchbook. Very good detailing.
Cheers!
--Voxina