Young Writers Society

Okay. All of these are made for a story I want ot start up as soon as I finish my nano.... *which probable won;t be finished in time...*

Well.. here you go. Links and I'll post one at a time as uploaded for those you can't get on deviant art.

http://myfreindsavamp.deviantart.com/ar ... -104322274

http://myfreindsavamp.deviantart.com/ar ... -104320486

http://myfreindsavamp.deviantart.com/ar ... -104322458

http://myfreindsavamp.deviantart.com/art/Kiss-104402655

http://myfreindsavamp.deviantart.com/ar ... -104330133

http://myfreindsavamp.deviantart.com/ar ... -104322643

Okay the first one I'll start with the loves her one. This is used from Gentlemen's alliance <don't think I spelled it right...

Anywho. The outfit colors and hair are all probable diffrent from what they would be but... um yeah. I wanted to use it for a pic of mine I'll need for a story as I said above. All free hand. Bt technically I 'copied' still as my dad and mom have to get technical on me now....

Now Maria S. Again used from Gentlemen's alliance. Changed the hair and the eyes again. Free handed again but still dignified as 'copied'.

Hold me is one from vampire Knight. So.. yeah. I like this one a lot. Hair is probable the same and the clothing color is unspecified.... So yeah. Free hand.

Kiss? is from VK too but hair is definiatly changed. Clothing... there isn't much so don't worry about it. Free hand.

Suicide boy is um... a pic of one of the main characters. *one of the two you've seen in the couple pics*
He isn't as devoted to killing himself in the near future thanks to Maria S. who saves him from most of his ways... *I'm not giving this all away*

Maria S.-different char is one of my bad pics I made for the story... *gosh darn it* Anyways...

This one isn't my favorite at all.

I need reviews... if that's possible.

I think they're very good. I wish I could draw half that well.

The second and last, I like. Again, well done. I'm sorry I can't give you a proper critique.

Thanks Kyte. And I also, myself can't give a critique for my life. Practice is the key. Though I have no pure originality in most of my works....

What I meant is, I'm not very experienced at judging art. I'm an amature artist myself.

Hm.... *shrugs* We win some we lose some.

ehhe.. You know, A lot of those pictures are very tragic.. I really hope that's not how oyou really are..

Anyways, if the intent was to make them look like Japensese manga, you pulled it off very nicely.

No. That isn't how I am. It's for a story I am slowly creating. A picture for every chapter kind of thing.

And Japanese style was how I was intending on. ^-^

This all are extremely well drawn, myfriendsavamp

They all seem to tell their own story, each their own little blurp. I like it!

I look forward to see where the story goes from this

PM me when you start writing!

http://myfreindsavamp.deviantart.com/ar ... -104604928

Prologue and chapter one is there. Haven't gotten any farther because my rooms a pig sty and I lost my notebook in there...