It's okay. It's not horrible for what it is but it's not spectacular for what it isn't, either. Yea...that made no sense. I'm kind of at a bit of a loss because I'm not sure what kind of character this story portraits: is it cartoon, realistic, somewhere in the middle? No one knows. I think we need more detail on this picture before a real critique can be given.
It's okay! I suggest that if you haven't already, change your password to something that your friends wouldn't know, Pronto!
Adam and Vampire: It is removed. Otherwise you would see that little symbol. (That I forgot the name of. )
Firearris
[Griffinkeeper] 10:45 pm: The guard appears "We have weasels now!" [Firearris] 10:45 pm: askes the guard for the weasel! [Griffinkeeper] 10:45 pm: The guard gives Firearris the Weasel. [Firearris] 10:46 pm: aquires the weasel and renames it "Cat" Take that, Lumi.
You'd better wise up, Pony... you get tough like me and you don't get hurt. You look out for yourself and nothing can touch you, man. — Dallas Winston, The Outsiders
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