Well, I don't really have much to nit-pick on. Normally I would say "do it in ink instead of pencil" but you've already covered that. Mmm...I love the hands and feets, those make my day....though I do wonder how he stands without falling over.
Oh! I would make the design on the "thigh sheilds" a bit darker and possibly clean up on the lines on the face/head/facemask thingy. That one curved one coming how looks about 50% like it's supposed to be there.
This thing is awesome! I love the detail on the guns and the armor, and the shape of the body is awesome. Very detailed, very cool. I'm thinking this is gonna be a pretty awesome storybook.
Ooh, nifty. That's what you were talking about on MSN. *nods*
I can't wait for the storybook to get started! It'll be awesome.
-St. Razorblade
The Official YWS Pirate
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O ma gosh, I absolutely love it. I really like the armour design. It gives it a sort of mystical quality. Guns are brilliant, very sweet. My only nit pick is the right foot. I think it should be a little straighter. Of course It's bloody gorgeoous anyway. *distracted by the awesomeness*
"Maybe Senpai ate Yuka-tan's last bon-bon?" ----Stupei, Ace Defective
Just the fact you're drawing makes me smile, man. Since I've been playing Mass Effect for days, this excites me. His upper right arm seems a bit funkily placed above the other though. Otherwise, awesome.
Nate wrote:And if YWS ever does become a company, Jack will be the President of European Operations. In fact, I'm just going to call him that anyways.
Meh, I printed out a copy and inked it, then forgot I couldn't just erase the leftovers -.- So it looks really crappy. I hate my inking job, but so many of you have asked for it...here you go.
Got YWS? I do.
Lumi: Don't you drag my donobby into this. Lumi: He's the sweetest angel this side of hades.
*looks at inked picture, that at her own shaded pictures and her little adventure with charcoal that she got all over herself*
Wow, that's really good Hunter!! Of course, I say this because I can't ink...or do anything that doens't have to do with a pencil that isn't colored...but it looks really good!!
*hides links to her laaaame pictures*
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