This is very good! Of course, I have a few suggestions. The head is a little small for the width of the shoulders and the size of the chest. Also, try doing a pen instead of pencil? It just looks so much neater.
And, again, don't sign it there. Try the bottom corner...it's so distracting there!
I agree that his head is too small but the detail's great, especially on the clothes. Maybe work on having a larger range of shading to give it a bit more life and I'd quite like to see a full body drawing but in general, this is very nice.
I realize that the shading looks pretty lame on here, but try to remember that I have pretty much the worst scanner in the world. The shading is actually much more distinct. And, remember, I drew most of these a good five years ago. Basically every picture I post is going to have a similar signature. I know they look awful, but there's no use commenting on them; they're on everything I ever drew. It was my style at the time, what can I say. I mean, I agree with you completely, but, I'm not going to change something I did all those years ago. Should I pick up my -pencil- again, I will take your advice. . . . except about switching to pen. ~_^
Nice work.
I know that in the game he's got a small head... But I think you should make it a little bigger here. His hair is bigger than his head
The next step would be to add some colour!
This is really good, but I have some suggestions:
- The head does look a bit small, and his ears seem to be rather larger than I remember.
- The hair is kinda...big. Not pouffeh, just kind of voluminous in a stiff way.
But the details were excellent and I think the face was really well-drawn.
Keep drawing!
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