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Mon Aug 13, 2007 5:17 am
Sohini says...



hey, I came across thjis drawing. it's a little more than a year old. I used plastic colours for it. :)


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So, what do you think? :shock:

Oh, the characters are Shauron and Myelin (I have spelt all wrong, haven't I ?) :oops:
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Mon Aug 13, 2007 6:44 am
melodicatastrophe says...



Ahh, they're so CUTE. I wish I could draw like that =(

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Tue Aug 14, 2007 3:50 am
Alteran says...



I like them. Their hands seem a bit off to me but other than they're cool. I liked the use of the colour to show the flow of the fabric.
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Tue Aug 14, 2007 5:03 pm
Lynlyn says...



They're very very cute! I like the colors you used, they're a little more saturated than they are in the TV show/manga, so it looks really bright and happy. What are plastic colors, by the way?

The only think I think you could make a teeny bit better is the shading/shadows. Making a block of color darker at the edges might look right at first, but often times it just makes it look puffy/pillow-like. Instead of just shading around all the folds, etc, try to imagine that there's a light source on, say, the right of Meilin, so that the left edge of her clothes, her left shoulder, et cetera, would be darker. That way, they'll look a little more three dimensional.
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Thu Aug 16, 2007 4:08 am
sokool15 says...



So very huggable...perhaps I shall sweep them into my arms and carry them away, yes? Better than petting a puppy, as they say.

Anyway, *hem* good job. The girl's left hand (viewer's right) looks awkward and disconnected from the rest of her arm. Otherwise I am duly impressed. Very well done.

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Thu Aug 16, 2007 10:58 am
Squall says...



Oh my god! I love cardcaptor sakura. It's one mean anime.

Anyways, I liked how you used the colours. The thumb for the hand seems a bit off though but no biggie. I think you could had also used some shading techniques to make it seem more realstic but that's just me. lol

Though, I really want to see a pic of Sakura.
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Thu Aug 16, 2007 11:29 am
Saphira says...



Amazing! The colours are just fantastic and all the proportions look good. Very good and you deserve five stars for that! :smt005

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Thu Aug 16, 2007 2:19 pm
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It's so CUTE!!!! The colors are really good. :D
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Fri Aug 17, 2007 4:54 am
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YAY!!! Thanks for the lovely comments.

Madame Kool, you came hug them as much as you can.

Squallz, I will find out a Sakura Drawing,I drew her at least three times, I fill need to search for them.

Yes, the hands look a little odd, but hey, when was i ever good at drawing things in perfect proportion?
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Fri Aug 17, 2007 6:51 pm
Via says...



The colors are really cool, actually. I like the guy a little better....though both would look better with some non-albino skin coloring. I really like the outfits, though.
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Sat Aug 18, 2007 4:50 pm
-Save-Ferris- says...



I think they are quite good.
I would have liked them better if they weren't so bright. I think pencils would've been a better medium to use. Despite the fact Meilin is laughing Li(?) looks very serious and ready to fight.
Also the hands seem a little off and Meilin's face needs to be a little big bigger.

However the body proportions are fantastic and it is very well drawn. (:
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Sat Aug 18, 2007 4:58 pm
Alainna says...



It's very good and vivid. Only a small comment- the boys hands are too small for his body.

Other than that I really liked this!

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Sun Aug 19, 2007 12:12 am
Rydia says...



They're very good and very accurate. I think the guys clothes should be a touch darker but they're really well drawn if my memory is correct (I'm afraid I haven't watched the film for a few years)
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Sun Aug 19, 2007 7:10 am
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*bows* Thank ye
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Fri Sep 21, 2007 6:42 pm
GingerLizzy says...



These are super dooper!

It's like.. WHOA! The colours are lovely and bold and I can see no white gaps - of which there are always some on my work. The lines are neat and clean too, so that's great.

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