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Baroness Ink wrote:Whoop! Can you say, "Ariel hair"?
A couple of things:
1. The wand
...stubby and chunky. XD
2. The eyes
are not almond-shaped or startlingly green!! :twitches:
3. The color of her vest/tie
are Gyffindor colors, and they're supposed to be grey, I think, at least until second year.
4. The freckles look like zits! Try a browner color.
Other than that, I like it.
Baroness Ink wrote:3. The color of her vest/tie
are Gyffindor colors, and they're supposed to be grey, I think, at least until second year.
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