That's pretty cool. The only thing I could really saw about it is did Jojo ask you to use brown and white for her name because it just seems a little plain to me. I would use another color instead of brown but other than that it's pretty cool.
Should we not walk? On our feet? The ones I now have again? I do like my feet. They are befittingly perambulatory. — Pattern (Rhythm of War by Brandon Sanderson)