Cuuute! Love the giant pen. And the banana. And how this guy needs to lose some weight. Is it okay if I leave one bitty suggestion? Add more contrast between the banana and the outfit. I didn't really spot the banana until later. Besides that, sweet job!
You never really know how much of you takes residence in other people... We all exchange bits and pieces of ourselves with each other until we're big sparkly collages of everyone and everything we've ever loved — GengarTheGhost