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Sun Jan 25, 2009 7:35 am
frenchyrude says...



This took me a some time.
any review are welcome

its from a pic that my mom took in africa.

i free drew it. :)
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Sun Jan 25, 2009 8:17 am
Lava says...



Hey !

Wow it's brilliant. Really great pic! I swear it's wonderful you have talent, that's for sure.

Nitpicks:
1. Her left eye is kind of differently shaped and larger compared to the right one.
2. The spotlight effect should be minimal, it spoils you work. It should be just a soft fading off toward the corners, not so... harsh.

Besides these itsy nitpicks, it's just too good :)
I love her looking back and the way you've drawn her clothes.

But either way, a free hand drawing? I'm amazed.
Keep drawing!
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Sun Jan 25, 2009 3:05 pm
Rosendorn says...



Oh. My. Gosh. You Free Drew that?

I noticed that the way her cheek and new blend together is very white. You loose her jawline around her cheek and ear.

That's all I really noticed. Amazing work!
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Sun Jan 25, 2009 7:09 pm
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frenchyrude says...



Thanks you guys.

Yes I agree about the spot light.

The problem is my drawing is to big to be skane and the flash made the cheek too light, all that is normally way darker.

and yes i see what you mean about the eyes. ill try to be careful next. (drawing the eyes are the hard part for me)

thank you again for your helpful critic :)

Elysa
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