I like the idea of your cover, and the title is rather catchy. However, I think maybe a little photoshop will help. Make it a little bit more interesting to draw the eye in. I know you aren't supposed to judge a book by its cover, but some people do...>.> *points to self* Ahem...um, anyway, I think adjusting the color a little will draw in the eye. Also, blurring the background could help to put a bit more emphasis on the girl.
I'm not a wiz at photoshop, with luck you are, or you know someone that is XD
Best of luck! You're way farther than I am! I've got about 5000 words so far >.<
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Ok last page I do like but it isn't as good as the others, I think it is all that white space, looks more amateaur than the rest. Hmm...back covers are always difficult...I do love the front though with the girl its super
If you have built castles in the air, your work need not be lost; that is where they should be. Now put the foundations under them. — Henry David Thoreau, "Walden"
