Well, I will agree with you. SENIORS ROCK! CLASS 08 BABY!
However the piece was ok. It was kind of, plain, little bit simple, and it didn't really have a point. It has a lot of potential to become a great poem, or prose, but as it stands now, it is not really all that great.
Hurray to the graduates of 08! xD
Life's but a walking shadow, a poor player, that struts and frets his hour upon the stage, and then is heard no more; it is a tale told by an idiot, full of sound and fury, signifying nothing. ~William Shakespeare~
Scripts need love too!!!