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Vasticity wrote: (We open to the main titles. Then we cut to Derek Hanson, sitting on his couch, watching television. There is a knock. Derek turns off the TV, sits up, and walks to the door next to his couch. He opens the door, and a man hands him a package)
MAN:
Derek Hanson?
DEREK:
Yeah, that's me.
(The man hands Derek a clipboard and a pen. Derek scribbles something on the end, and hands the board back. Derek shuts the door, and sits back down.
We fade out to black, and open back to a computer screen.
WARREN:
Is he asleep yet? We can't make a move unless he is.
(We cut to Derek, sleeping in his bed. There is a bump. Derek rustles a little, but stays asleep.
WARREN:
Whew.. Got it.
(There is suddenly a gunshot, and Warren drops the disc, his hand bloody. He screams in pain, then pulls out a pistol and scans the room. The camera looks over the room. We cut back to Warren. He lowers his gun, and puts it back in his holster
WARREN:
Thanks for your cooperation.
(Warren opens the front door, and walks out, leaving a bewildered Derek behind. We cut to Warren, walking away from the house. A man suddenly tackles him. The two roll on the ground. The Attacker punches Warren multiple times. Warren tosses him off and wipes the blood from his nose. The two stand up from the ground. Warren draws his gun, as does the attacker. The attacker fires first at Warren's feet. Warren dodges, loses his balance, and falls over. The attacker pulls him to his feet, and punches him once more. Warren goes limp. The Attacker drops him on the ground, rummages around his pocket, and pulls out the disc. We cut to Derek, coming out from his house towards the attacker)
WARREN:
(Opens the front door, and walks out. He walks away from the house.
(A man suddenly tackles him. The two roll on the ground.)
ATTACKER:
(Punches WARREN multiple times.)
WARREN:
(Tosses him off and wipes the blood from his nose.)
(The two stand up from the ground and draw their guns.)
ATTACKER:
(Fires first at WARREN's feet.)
WARREN:
(Dodges, loses his balance, and falls over.)
ATTACKER:
(Pulls WARREN to his feet, and punches him once more.)
WARREN:
(Goes limp.)
ATTACKER:
(Drops WARREN on the ground, rummages around his pocket, and pulls out the disc.)
DEREK:
(Comes out from his house towards ATTACKER.)
The camera swerves around, and we see Warren, aiming his pistol at Derek. He quickly gets up, and puts the gun against Derek's head)
WARREN:
How do you know my orders, Eclipse? How could you have any knowledge of such a thing.
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